imperfecta :D

Greetings :D

As i promised nic and jasper, here is a little prologue for our little story because we got bored of pasca PMR activities.. so why not? anyways, comments are highly appreciated. Oh yeah, notice the little blank space at the bottom? I would really want your opinion on that. Your opinions are very very much appreciated. Well, to let you know a little bit about our story, which is about a couple, Jodi and Keith, falls in love, the guy is so obsessed about working that he has to go overseas and work for 10 years. As a workaholic, he accepted it. The girl, for instance can't accept long-distance relationship so got a divorce with this man. A lot of drama happened between the girl, her best friend Alison as well as her best friend's husband, Kennedy. The juiciest part is when the girl's ex-husband all of a sudden came back from overseas to discover his ex-wife with a son.

well, i called this little story imperfecta, but we all have not came up with a suitable tittle for it YET.. so tada! :D

NIC AND JAS: i want your comments too! and don't forget to write.. as you 2 promised.. :D

Here's the Prologue.. not as good as .. well.. let's just say it's just a beginner's material.. hope you'

d enjoy it

As the sun rises high in the sky, it welcomes me with it's warm embrace. Today, is a very special day to me, and it's also the most important day on a girl's life. Alison Gilbert, my close friend as well as my personal psychologist barged into my room carrying a load of presents for me. " I'm so proud of you" she said while hugging me. " Well, I just don't know whether I'd make it to the aisle" I chuckled. " Our Jodi here finally is a big girl now, here's a present from Kennedy and myself, he tried to make it to the wedding, but he had an emergency at the hospital, hope you'd like it" I opened up the well wrapped package and found a _______ in the package. " Awh, Thanks! you know you don't really have to" I joked. " Well, you're not getting married everyday, so why not?" She hugged me tight around my waist and suddenly broke off when my father knocked on the door. " It's time" Alison quickly put up finishing touches of makeup onto my face and helped me pull myself together. Then, she went out of my dressing room to get ready for the wedding.

Keith looked so gorgeous in his black suit. My dad gazed at me with tears filled in his eyes, and slowly escorted me down the aisle. He must be so proud of me that words clenched his mouth. My wedding dress was so long that I nearly tripped over it, all thanks to Alison for choosing it for me. When it comes to special occasions like this, Alison will be the very first to raise up her hand to help organize it, and even so it's her best friend's wedding, which explains the long dress. " Don't make me fall, dad" I whispered. He pulled my hand through his arm and then grasped it tightly. I saw Keith's face, filled with vision overwhelmed my mind. And then, as he met my gaze he broke into a breathtaking smile of exultation.

Marriage, such a simple word but lies a deeper meaning. Alison and I used to talk about how our marriage would turn out to be when we were just high school teenagers. We pictured the flowery dress, the handsome groom, profusions of white blossoms, gossamer ribbons... Ever since the day when Keith proposed to me during our high school reunion along with Alison and Kennedy, Alison shrieked and tossed her arms all over me, later then went out and didn't came back for a really long time. Then It was really tough for her that time, age 25 yet still single. Well, that was when Kennedy kicks in. I spotted them making out just outside of the restaurant under a tree. Awh, how romantic. I remembered how Keith and I met, we went to High school together as well as university. He fell for me and we got all crazy over each other, and that was how our relationship bloomed. As for Alison and Kennedy, they started dating after my proposal and voila, the church bells started ringing.

My hallucinations broke off when it's time for us to say the bonding words. Keith shifted his gaze towards me and blurted out the 2 words which symbolizes our happily ever after. When it was my turn, I looked at him and saw the man who I truly loved and adored.. Then I said " I do." When the priest united us both, he lifted my veil to the back of my head and started kissing me passionately. I kissed him back, not knowing that a whole crowd of high school mates and families were watching. Alison flew towards me and congratulated me.. again.. she can never be so happy. My wedding, the perfect day of my life... was spontanious.. and just like how I dreamed how it was suppose to be.

As the sun slowly descended beneath the hills, the night came up and washed across the whole landscape abruptly, one minute is was sunset orange, and now it was black. Keith grabbed hold of my hand and danced with me at the ballroom during our wedding dinner. My favourite song was played. " So, how are you enjoying your wedding so far, Mrs ___?" he said. " Best day ever " I said as he twirled me across the dance floor. " You tired yet?" " Why would I be? Party just getting started" He smiled and pressed his lips onto mine.

Every girl has a dream in life. Good grades in school, fall in love, get married, have children, live out the golden age... Life is just wonderful. And my dream, is to be with this charming man, for the rest of my life.

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for the continuation of the story,

nic will be writing Jodi's and Alex

Jas : Kennedy and Keith

ME! : alison and Sandra

YOU GUYS BETTER WRITE! =.=

THanks for reading! :D